Most Sundays, though, I'm at my mom's house, which is stocked with full cable and a working washer (unlike mine, which conked out a few months ago). So I spend most of the day doing laundry and watching a Law & Order marathon. But I was so into Jeff Garigliano's Dogface
I could say that Dogface
This is a finely crafted novel. The foreshadowing is on point, and one of the big reasons I kept reading tonight instead of flipping on the TV was to see what really happened in those soundproof music rooms that made a kid deaf in one ear. The descriptions are perfect, too -- I could see the camp. Garigliano's passages of sleeping in sweat-soaked beds reminded me of the first summer in my last apartment before I got an air conditioner. I thought I would go nuts sleeping in that heat, and I almost did. My mom and I installed a fresh-from-Home-Depot AC unit in my room in a thunderstorm because I thought I was going to lose my mind. I can't even imagine what it was like for these kids (even if they are fictional).
A passage:
"The humidity must do something to bring out the mosquitoes, because they swarm pretty quickly. Liz can feel them on her face, hear them flitting by her ears. Bugs are everywhere on the property -- moths, mantises, spiders the size of mice. The whole place is like empire of the insects. The beams in the cabin above her bunk are pitted with termite damage that looks like old acne, and there are two spots on the perimeter lap where the midges always gather in furious, flitting clouds that blur the air. Liz has to remember to hold her breath each time they pass, or else she inhales big, bitter mouthfuls of them."
Now that's some fine writing. Gross, but fine writing.
The one thing this book is not is a young adult novel. I was sent Dogface
In any case, he said that this book was rejected by too many publishers to count, though they said they would have bought it if he cleaned it up and made it young adult appropriate. What a tragedy that would have been -- to take out all the rough stuff (prostitutes, QVC) would have made it just another "camp sucks" novel, and maybe then the novel would have sucked too (I'm not surprised that MacAdam Cage picked up the book. They take risks with mixed results. Some are hits, others misses, but always different.)
I kept thinking back to book 3 of 52, Jake Wizner's Spanking Shakespeare
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